Friday 13 May 2016

Week 1 Reflection

  For writing the teachers have been writing Charlotte's web and we had to describe Zuckerman's barn.  
The barn was as tough as red wood. The barn is big like an elephant.  And Wilbur the happy little pig lives in the barn with his animal friends.  
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  1. Unknown22 May 2016 at 13:16

    Hi Isaiah this is a very good description but there is just one thing you might need to fix up that is the full stop behind the word elephant, maybe change it to a comma. Thanks Liam.

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  2. Unknown1 June 2016 at 15:13

    Hi Isaiah, a great start to your writing. I like where you said 'The barn was as tough as red wood'. I would love to see you continue to work on this to include more detail.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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